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i do like the melody and stuff
you're vocals could have been louder
it sounds like you need to sing louder in general
to get the full tone of one's voice, you have to sing quite loud
just stand farther away from your mic, or turn down the recieving on it.
your voice sounds like if you really opened up and sang loudly you could get a great tone
and yes like someone else said, a female humming/singing in the background would be absolutely wonderful
this is...
very nice.
i liked the transfer into that steel drum sounding instrument around 1:00
and sounded like it needed some sound compression a bit after 1:00 because it begins to sound distorted, but i get that problem alot too, its hard to avoid it.
but overall it has a nice melody and the phaser towards the end sounded nice.
Yeah sometimes it sneaks in there, but usually with Fl Studio your stuff either sounds like it has no fidelity at all, or if you crank it up then it sounds all distorted. Although I do recommend getting the iZotope Ozone 3 Plugin (it is really good if you want to master your music well and don't really don't have a clue how to master).
yes.
it really just needs some after effects
in the middle of that melody if you would have had a filter or a compressed sound filter added it would have made it more interesting.
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