mhm

the bear at the end i think is the best part.

-peace.

Why?

This is just a poor concept from the start quite honestly.

The voices were pretty pathetic, and their jokes were even worse.

I also don't understand why everyone who voice acts on newgrounds has a weird eastern european accent. Seriously? Why?

yeah

i didnt really like the girlyish-ness of it
but the animation was very ren-and-stimpy like

but it was very long and well thought out.

yes

i do like the melody and stuff
you're vocals could have been louder

it sounds like you need to sing louder in general
to get the full tone of one's voice, you have to sing quite loud
just stand farther away from your mic, or turn down the recieving on it.
your voice sounds like if you really opened up and sang loudly you could get a great tone

and yes like someone else said, a female humming/singing in the background would be absolutely wonderful

this is...

very nice.

i liked the transfer into that steel drum sounding instrument around 1:00

and sounded like it needed some sound compression a bit after 1:00 because it begins to sound distorted, but i get that problem alot too, its hard to avoid it.

but overall it has a nice melody and the phaser towards the end sounded nice.

yes.

it really just needs some after effects

in the middle of that melody if you would have had a filter or a compressed sound filter added it would have made it more interesting.